Student Response

http://kelseywunderlich.blogspot.com/2013/11/wdrb-story-bourbon-sold-to-raise-money.html

I definitely agree with Kelsey. It is very important to honor those that fallen in service, but when it comes to newsworthiness, this doesn't exactly meet the criteria. Unfortunately, it was the author of this story that made the mistake, she should of stressed, the last portion of the story more. As Kelsey stated, the end of the story is where the important information appears. The main purpose of this story is to acknowledge the fact that a criminal has killed a police officer, and has not been brought to custody, therefore still looming around the city, causing a possible threat to the public. When it comes to mentioning the fallen servicemen, the author should have left a link to the obituary of the officer.